It's rather clumsy. The original said that simply Lewry studied under Lejewski and Prior at Manchester. The revised version presents the same facts in a horrid circumlocutory style - "Lewry's educational background included studies at the [[University of Manchester]], where he focused on mathematical logic ... [and] was instructed by Lejewski and Prior" which says the same thing in twice as many words.
If I used a sock and revised it, the PLEASE DO NOT RESTORE would apply. If I said I was a sock and gave my real identity, presumably that would be OK? But then I would be blocked.
[edit] Indeed, someone who claims to be me has done so (and cleaned up the mess that Ottava made of the second section). Is this person Peter Damian? If so the work must be removed as made by a banned user. If not, it must be removed because it violates copyright. Either way, it must be removed.
The idiotic Triplestop has now reported the edits as vandalism
http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=...oldid=316758920This post has been edited by Peter Damian: