The Wikipedia Review: A forum for discussion and criticism of Wikipedia
Wikipedia Review Op-Ed Pages

Welcome, Guest! ( Log In | Register )

> Help

This subforum is for critical evaluation of Wikipedia articles. However, to reduce topic-bloat, please make note of exceptionally poor stubs, lists, and other less attention-worthy material in the Miscellaneous Grab Bag thread. Also, please be aware that agents of the Wikimedia Foundation might use your evaluations to improve the articles in question.

Useful Links: Featured Article CandidatesFeatured Article ReviewArticles for DeletionDeletion Review

> World War II, The anti-US version
Emperor
post Tue 10th June 2008, 4:51pm
Post #1


Try spam today!
*******

Group: Regulars
Posts: 1,842
Joined: Sat 21st Jul 2007, 4:09pm
Member No.: 2,042



When will Oberiko and his group stop?

He's won just about every argument he's had, and still keeps going.

He's got the article under constant semi-protection.
He's deleted the American picture from the lead montage, and now there are 2 Soviet, 2 Commonwealth, and 2 Japanese.
The Intro and infobox refuse to say that the war started in 1939, and the 1937/39 debate continues.
The Intro and infobox don't list the major combatants
The major commanders aren't listed anywhere in the article. (For fun, try to find "Eisenhower" or "Zhukov" anywhere on the page using Edit --> Find on this Page.)

The entire article is written in Oberiko's weird wiki-summary style where the proper names of events are hidden within Wiki-links. See the Normandy Invasion coverage, in its entirety:
QUOTE
In June, 1944, the Western Allies invaded northern France


And check my favorite passage:
QUOTE
The Soviets decided to make their stand at Stalingrad which was in the path of the advancing German armies and by mid-November the Germans had nearly taken Stalingrad in bitter street fighting when the Soviets began their second winter counter-offensive, starting with an encirclement of German forces at Stalingrad[94] and an assault on the Rzhev salient near Moscow, though the latter failed disastrously.[95


I've been following the article for years now, and seen people come and go but basically anyone who doesn't agree with Oberiko gets frustrated and leaves. He's not afraid to swing his administrator status and have people blocked who edit war with him or Parsecboy.

I could go through line by line and point out not only anti-Western and anti-American bias, but also outright errors. Take the first line of the Background section:
QUOTE
In the aftermath of World War I, the defeated German Empire signed the Treaty of Versailles.[7]

How does anyone not notice this for months and months? I've been watching it as an experiment to see if Wikipedians will ever get a clue, but, well, you see. Later in the background you'll find out that Germany's goal with Austria was to make it a "satellite state". Both of these statements are referenced too?

Insult to injury: the Holocaust is described as "the systematic purging of Jews in Europe". Well I'm pretty sure English isn't Oberiko's first language, but then why doesn't anyone help him? Oh right, because it's so obvious that the article is Owned that you'd be an idiot to try to help.

I know this breaks my rule of thumb not to help Wikipedia myself, but it is the number one search result and I'm feeling a bit of remorse just letting it fester, with it being around D-Day this week and having just recently talked to guy who was a B-29 pilot based in Saipan. I can't believe a generation of kids might be seeing their first encyclopedia article about WWII on Wikipedia.

This post has been edited by Emperor: Tue 10th June 2008, 9:40pm
User is offlineProfile CardPM
Go to the top of the page
+Quote Post
 
Reply to this topicStart new topic
Replies
ThurstonHowell3rd
post Tue 10th June 2008, 7:43pm
Post #2


Senior Member
****

Group: Contributors
Posts: 280
Joined: Thu 6th Mar 2008, 11:24pm
Member No.: 5,302



This article does have a non-American POV, but I did not read anything that would be in my opinion be an error.

It was the Soviets who defeated the Germans. Before June, 1944 that vast majority of the allied forces fighting against Germany were from the Soviet Union and before the Allies opened up another front in Normandy in June, 1944 it was already certain that the Germans were going to be defeated.

User is offlineProfile CardPM
Go to the top of the page
+Quote Post
Proabivouac
post Tue 10th June 2008, 9:48pm
Post #3


Bane of all wikiland
*******

Group: Contributors
Posts: 2,246
Joined: Thu 23rd Aug 2007, 8:25am
Member No.: 2,647

WP user page - talk
check - contribs



QUOTE(ThurstonHowell3rd @ Tue 10th June 2008, 7:43pm) *

This article does have a non-American POV, but I did not read anything that would be in my opinion be an error.

It was the Soviets who defeated the Germans. Before June, 1944 that vast majority of the allied forces fighting against Germany were from the Soviet Union and before the Allies opened up another front in Normandy in June, 1944 it was already certain that the Germans were going to be defeated.

Is it not equally obvious that had the war involved only Germany and Russia, leaving Germany access to world trade, that Russia would have been soundly defeated?

This post has been edited by Proabivouac: Tue 10th June 2008, 9:48pm
User is offlineProfile CardPM
Go to the top of the page
+Quote Post
Milton Roe
post Tue 10th June 2008, 10:10pm
Post #4


Known alias of J. Random Troll
*********

Group: Regulars
Posts: 10,209
Joined: Thu 28th Feb 2008, 1:03am
Member No.: 5,156

WP user page - talk
check - contribs



QUOTE(Proabivouac @ Tue 10th June 2008, 9:48pm) *

QUOTE(ThurstonHowell3rd @ Tue 10th June 2008, 7:43pm) *

This article does have a non-American POV, but I did not read anything that would be in my opinion be an error.

It was the Soviets who defeated the Germans. Before June, 1944 that vast majority of the allied forces fighting against Germany were from the Soviet Union and before the Allies opened up another front in Normandy in June, 1944 it was already certain that the Germans were going to be defeated.

Is it not equally obvious that had the war involved only Germany and Russia, leaving Germany access to world trade, that Russia would have been soundly defeated?

The Russians get the credit for doing a large fraction of the fighting and most of the military dying in the European theater of WW II. But yes, if the Germans had captured Moscow and the oil fields, it would have been all over for the USSR, and with those oil fields, the Germans would have (temporarily) won the game of RISK.

Until we atom bombed them sometime after August 1945, that is. But that was a wild joker nobody really knew would or could be played, until the previous month.

As it was, the USSR came within a hair's breadth of losing it. And that's with massive Allied material aid, and a fair amount of Allied pin-down of German armies in Africa and Italy, which otherwise would have been decisive in the East. Much as in WW I, it really did take everybody to beat the Germans in "conventional" war.

Unlike WW I, however, if everybody had not been able to win conventionally, the US still would have atom bombed the Germans into glowing embers, no matter how well they'd done, sometime in 1946. The Germans just could not reach the US with anything damaging, and would not have been able to, for some years. They had no aircraft carriers, and their plans for ultralong-range bombers were going to carry what? Nothing of consequence can be carried 3000 miles, except a nuke. But with an atom bomb, you can reach a long way and touch someone. If we assume Germany had totally won in Europe (including against the UK), we could not have used the B-29 against them (no place to base it), and the bombs of 1945 couldn't be dropped from anything else. But smaller bombs dropable from carrier-launched B-25s would have been available within another year, and that would have been it, for Germany. It's well that it didn't end that way, but it could have. And certainly would have.

This post has been edited by Milton Roe: Tue 10th June 2008, 10:11pm
User is offlineProfile CardPM
Go to the top of the page
+Quote Post
Disillusioned Lackey
post Tue 10th June 2008, 10:29pm
Post #5


Unregistered









QUOTE(Milton Roe @ Tue 10th June 2008, 5:10pm) *
If we assume Germany had totally won in Europe (including against the UK), we could not have used the B-29 against them (no place to base it), and the bombs of 1945 couldn't be dropped from anything else. But smaller bombs dropable from carrier-launched B-25s would have been available within another year, and that would have been it, for Germany. It's well that it didn't end that way, but it could have. And certainly would have.

The fire-bombing of Dresden was pretty awful, and as close to atomic weaponry as conventional bombs can be. I drove through there right after the wall fell, and it was still pretty much of a mess, as were the highways which didn't see repairs the entire 50 year period.

QUOTE(Proabivouac @ Tue 10th June 2008, 9:48pm) *

Is it not equally obvious that had the war involved only Germany and Russia, leaving Germany access to world trade, that Russia would have been soundly defeated?
You mean if they were the only two countries in the world? Really, you cannot conjecture thus, or you have an entire new framework to add to ex post facto history. The US entry to the war was incredibly important. This was the frame of reference for the first 50 years after the war's end.

If there are anti-American, or US-minimization elements on those articles, my guess is that they are twenty-somethings. There seems to be a sort of generational Euro-youth backlash against the pro-American gratitude of their parents. I've seen that myriad in the past 10 or so years.
Go to the top of the page
+Quote Post
Milton Roe
post Wed 11th June 2008, 12:00am
Post #6


Known alias of J. Random Troll
*********

Group: Regulars
Posts: 10,209
Joined: Thu 28th Feb 2008, 1:03am
Member No.: 5,156

WP user page - talk
check - contribs



QUOTE(Disillusioned Lackey @ Tue 10th June 2008, 10:29pm) *

QUOTE(Milton Roe @ Tue 10th June 2008, 5:10pm) *
If we assume Germany had totally won in Europe (including against the UK), we could not have used the B-29 against them (no place to base it), and the bombs of 1945 couldn't be dropped from anything else. But smaller bombs dropable from carrier-launched B-25s would have been available within another year, and that would have been it, for Germany. It's well that it didn't end that way, but it could have. And certainly would have.

The fire-bombing of Dresden was pretty awful, and as close to atomic weaponry as conventional bombs can be. I drove through there right after the wall fell, and it was still pretty much of a mess, as were the highways which didn't see repairs the entire 50 year period.

For sure, but in my alternate history, I'm assuming US is out, as was the premise. Germany doesn't declare war on the US right after Pearl Harbor, so we don't enter the war in Europe (having no excuse). By the time we do, Germany has captured the USSR and subsequently invaded England (or starved it to death). Both events as it was coming within a month of happening, even with the US involved and sending supplies like crazy.

So when it comes time to deal with Germany in 1946 we have no English base from which to mount an invason or firebomb cities (which takes hundreds of airplanes only flying a few hundred miles). Festung Europa really is that, without North Africa or England to launch from. Nobody creates firestorms from across the Atlantic, without nuclear weapons. Even firebombing Tokyo (which, was as bad as Dresden with twice the death toll) took 300 really big B29 planes from (as I remember) Saipan. Couldn't have done that from a carrier, nor from across an ocean. Nah, if you have no base, B-25s from carriers, with A-bombs, is about all you get.
User is offlineProfile CardPM
Go to the top of the page
+Quote Post
Proabivouac
post Wed 11th June 2008, 12:28am
Post #7


Bane of all wikiland
*******

Group: Contributors
Posts: 2,246
Joined: Thu 23rd Aug 2007, 8:25am
Member No.: 2,647

WP user page - talk
check - contribs



QUOTE(Milton Roe @ Wed 11th June 2008, 12:00am) *

For sure, but in my alternate history, I'm assuming US is out, as was the premise. Germany doesn't declare war on the US right after Pearl Harbor, so we don't enter the war in Europe (having no excuse). By the time we do, Germany has captured the USSR and subsequently invaded England (or starved it to death). Both events as it was coming within a month of happening, even with the US involved and sending supplies like crazy.

There are several other plausible alternate histories. One is that England and France fail to declare war on Germany following the invasion of Poland - it wouldn't be the first time they'd backed down, and really not a bad move, as the war was a disaster for both empires, and of course France was eliminated nearly outright. Then Germany and Russia come to blows on their own schedule.

Another is that England and Germany make a deal following the fall of France, with German withdrawal from Norway, Belgium and France, excepting Alsace-Lorraine, and some kind of protectorate in Denmark and Holland, in exchange for favorable terms of trade within the British Empire - a completely sensible deal on its face which would have benefited all concerned. Then Germany and Russia come to blows on their own schedule.
User is offlineProfile CardPM
Go to the top of the page
+Quote Post
Milton Roe
post Wed 11th June 2008, 12:55am
Post #8


Known alias of J. Random Troll
*********

Group: Regulars
Posts: 10,209
Joined: Thu 28th Feb 2008, 1:03am
Member No.: 5,156

WP user page - talk
check - contribs



QUOTE(Proabivouac @ Wed 11th June 2008, 12:28am) *

There are several other plausible alternate histories. One is that England and France fail to declare war on Germany following the invasion of Poland - it wouldn't be the first time they'd backed down, and really not a bad move, as the war was a disaster for both empires, and of course France was eliminated nearly outright. Then Germany and Russia come to blows on their own schedule.

I've got to read Pat Buchannan's Churchill, Hilter, and the Unnecessary War which has that premise. But I've no doubt Barbarosa would still have happened, even with France intact, and then the USSR would have been toast without Allied help. Would the Allies have sat that one out, too? But the Nazis really were evil, so we would have had to fight them eventually. WW II was necessary so long as Hitler was in power. Just a question of when. The longer we wait, the stronger he gets...
User is offlineProfile CardPM
Go to the top of the page
+Quote Post

Posts in this topic
Emperor   World War II   Tue 10th June 2008, 4:51pm
cyofee   Boo hoo, America isn't mentioned enough. There...   Tue 10th June 2008, 6:58pm
Emperor   Boo hoo, America isn't mentioned enough. Ther...   Tue 10th June 2008, 9:52pm
Peter Damian   How does anyone not notice this for months and m...   Tue 10th June 2008, 7:12pm
sarcasticidealist   Could you help me out here, as I know very little ...   Tue 10th June 2008, 9:14pm
guy   Were I to wish to be a dingus about this, I'd...   Tue 10th June 2008, 9:20pm
sarcasticidealist   What about the Italian invasion of Abyssinia in 19...   Tue 10th June 2008, 9:29pm
Herschelkrustofsky   Saying the war started in 1937 is an error, not a...   Tue 10th June 2008, 9:32pm
Emperor   How does anyone not notice this for months and ...   Tue 10th June 2008, 9:38pm
sarcasticidealist   The Kaiser abdicated and the German Empire ceased ...   Tue 10th June 2008, 9:42pm
guy   This article does have a non-American POV, but I ...   Tue 10th June 2008, 8:19pm
ThurstonHowell3rd   This article does have a non-American POV, but I...   Tue 10th June 2008, 8:52pm
Yehudi   I would contend calling these events a "the ...   Tue 10th June 2008, 9:03pm
Disillusioned Lackey   If we assume Germany had totally won in Europe (i...   Tue 10th June 2008, 10:29pm
Disillusioned Lackey   I've got to read Pat Buchannan's [i]Churc...   Wed 11th June 2008, 6:14am
Herschelkrustofsky   The fire-bombing of Dresden was pretty awful, and...   Wed 11th June 2008, 6:44am
Disillusioned Lackey   The death toll was substantially greater than Hi...   Wed 11th June 2008, 7:08am
Herschelkrustofsky   [quote name='Herschelkrustofsky' post='107164' da...   Wed 11th June 2008, 7:30am
Disillusioned Lackey   Oh.   Wed 11th June 2008, 7:35am
dogbiscuit   [quote name='Herschelkrustofsky' post='107164' d...   Wed 11th June 2008, 8:19am
thekohser   The most horrifying feature was that Dresden had ...   Wed 11th June 2008, 12:34pm
House of Cards   Not so fast on Dresden. It all depends on what y...   Wed 11th June 2008, 12:59pm
Herschelkrustofsky   [quote name='Herschelkrustofsky' post='107175' da...   Wed 11th June 2008, 3:09pm
Milton Roe   [quote name='thekohser' post='107233' date='Wed 1...   Thu 12th June 2008, 7:19pm
Herschelkrustofsky   [quote name='thekohser' post='107233' date='Wed ...   Thu 12th June 2008, 9:13pm
Milton Roe   Well, as I mentioned, this point is moot, because...   Thu 12th June 2008, 11:35pm
everyking   This article does have a non-American POV, but I...   Tue 10th June 2008, 11:25pm
Emperor   By the way, does anyone else think that parts of t...   Wed 11th June 2008, 4:49am
House of Cards   Any articles involving Eastern European history ar...   Wed 11th June 2008, 7:02am
everyking   Any articles involving Eastern European history a...   Thu 12th June 2008, 7:28pm
Milton Roe   This is preposterous. Nobody claims that there wa...   Thu 12th June 2008, 7:50pm
House of Cards   Yes. That doesn't get a lot of historical att...   Wed 11th June 2008, 7:19am
Disillusioned Lackey   A major reason why there is little attention to t...   Wed 11th June 2008, 7:24am
House of Cards   As an interesting note, the US Veterans Associatio...   Wed 11th June 2008, 7:38am
Proabivouac   As an interesting note, the US Veterans Associati...   Wed 11th June 2008, 7:56am
Rootology   As an interesting note, the US Veterans Associati...   Wed 11th June 2008, 3:40pm
House of Cards   As an interesting note, the US Veterans Associat...   Thu 12th June 2008, 7:00am
House of Cards   Ah, sorry. Not just the carnage, but everything el...   Wed 11th June 2008, 8:06am
Neil   As I recall, wasn't Dresden firebombed a] in r...   Wed 11th June 2008, 1:04pm
thekohser   As I recall, wasn't Dresden firebombed a] in ...   Wed 11th June 2008, 1:17pm
Pumpkin Muffins   As I recall, wasn't Dresden firebombed a] in...   Fri 13th June 2008, 1:05am
everyking   [quote name='thekohser' post='107233' date='Wed 1...   Fri 13th June 2008, 2:14am
Pumpkin Muffins   That's what humans do under certain conditio...   Fri 13th June 2008, 5:18am
everyking   That's what humans do under certain conditi...   Fri 13th June 2008, 5:44am
Proabivouac   Actually, I think capitalism and imperialism are ...   Fri 13th June 2008, 5:56am
everyking   Actually, I think capitalism and imperialism are...   Fri 13th June 2008, 6:02am
Pumpkin Muffins   A false dichotomy: cooperation with and generosi...   Fri 13th June 2008, 6:15am
Proabivouac   I don't understand your point. Are you trying...   Fri 13th June 2008, 6:39am
GlassBeadGame   I am always troubled by the equating of Hitler and...   Wed 11th June 2008, 1:19pm
Emperor   Google and Yahoo think that Wikipedia has the best...   Wed 11th June 2008, 2:39pm
Emperor   Since everyone is sharing, had I been Truman I wou...   Fri 13th June 2008, 4:13am
The Joy   Since everyone is sharing, had I been Truman I wo...   Fri 13th June 2008, 5:18am
Emperor   The "revisionists" or fringe theorists ...   Sat 14th June 2008, 4:41am
Proabivouac   Of course it's easier to obsess about Allied ...   Sat 14th June 2008, 6:43am
Disillusioned Lackey   source: http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?ti...   Sat 14th June 2008, 6:17pm
Emperor   What's with the "anger" comment? S...   Sun 15th June 2008, 3:16am
Moulton   Every human being should be insulted at the notion...   Fri 13th June 2008, 1:16pm
Viridae   As an interesting note, the US Veterans Associati...   Sat 14th June 2008, 7:13am
Moulton   There is a small museum in the town of Los Alamos ...   Sat 14th June 2008, 10:28am
Emperor   Now look at the intro: World War II or the Second...   Mon 23rd June 2008, 3:13am
Emperor   In March 1939 Germany invaded the rump of Czechosl...   Sat 21st February 2009, 11:20pm
Milton Roe   In March 1939 Germany invaded the rump of Czechos...   Sat 21st February 2009, 11:51pm
Emperor   That's the way I remember it. "Rump...   Sun 22nd February 2009, 12:04am
Bottled_Spider   England knew for sure from that date it would inev...   Sun 22nd February 2009, 3:17pm
Emperor   No no no. You're being selective in your quot...   Sun 22nd February 2009, 4:02pm
Milton Roe   [quote name='Milton Roe' post='157706' date='Sat ...   Sun 22nd February 2009, 4:04pm
LessHorrid vanU   [quote name='Milton Roe' post='157706' date='Sat 2...   Sun 22nd February 2009, 10:01pm
Milton Roe   [quote name='Milton Roe' post='157706' date='Sat ...   Mon 23rd February 2009, 7:05pm
LessHorrid vanU   [quote name='Milton Roe' post='157706' date='Sat...   Mon 23rd February 2009, 8:49pm
Emperor   To Emperor - that is how the nation styled itself...   Mon 23rd February 2009, 9:32pm
dogbiscuit   Winston was not liked in his own party let alone ...   Mon 23rd February 2009, 10:47pm
Milton Roe   Winston was not liked in his own party let alone ...   Tue 24th February 2009, 12:28am
Emperor   He got blamed for Galipoli in WW I, which wasn...   Tue 24th February 2009, 3:11am
Milton Roe   [quote name='Milton Roe' post='158145' date='Mon ...   Tue 24th February 2009, 3:35am
Emperor   In the US civil war McClellan was defeated again ...   Tue 24th February 2009, 1:06pm
everyking   [quote name='Milton Roe' post='158145' date='Mon ...   Mon 22nd February 2010, 6:59pm
RDH(Ghost In The Machine)   [quote name='Milton Roe' post='158145' date='Mon ...   Mon 22nd February 2010, 8:13pm
A Horse With No Name   I feel likewise about Operation Market Garden......   Mon 22nd February 2010, 8:55pm
Casliber   I remember the very first time I looked at WP I r...   Sun 22nd February 2009, 10:39am
Emperor   Oh dear. Be careful talking about "Great Bri...   Mon 23rd February 2009, 1:12pm
Floydsvoid   This is neither here nor there. I've grown qu...   Tue 24th February 2009, 12:51am
Emperor   Update - I just checked in on the Wikipedia articl...   Sat 5th December 2009, 4:51am
Trick cyclist   Also, there's no picture of Hitler, though od...   Sat 5th December 2009, 1:12pm
Emperor   Also, there's no picture of Hitler, though o...   Sat 5th December 2009, 1:49pm
Emperor   Still to this day Wikipedia can't get this top...   Mon 22nd February 2010, 6:24pm
Cla68   Still to this day Wikipedia can't get this to...   Tue 2nd March 2010, 12:51am
BelovedFox   If I could be bothered with it, I'd probably t...   Mon 22nd February 2010, 9:36pm
Emperor   If I could be bothered with it, I'd probably ...   Tue 23rd February 2010, 1:51am
radek   If I could be bothered with it, I'd probably...   Mon 1st March 2010, 7:43am
Emperor   Dang it I wish I wasn't topic banned! h...   Mon 1st March 2010, 1:39pm
radek   Dang it I wish I wasn't topic banned! ...   Mon 1st March 2010, 11:58pm
Milton Roe   For the realz I'll take Martin Gilbert or Nor...   Mon 1st March 2010, 7:20pm
BelovedFox   For the realz I'll take Martin Gilbert or No...   Mon 1st March 2010, 7:25pm
Emperor   Apparently seven references is the perfect number....   Mon 1st March 2010, 7:43pm
2 Pages V  1 2 >


Reply to this topicStart new topic
1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
0 Members:

 

-   Lo-Fi Version Time is now: 18th 6 13, 11:17pm